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Compare and Contrast Two Movies


In this essay, I’m going to compare and contrast two movies. They are The Family Stone and Because I Said So. Both of the movies I enjoyed very much because it has my favorite actress in them. Both movies are comedy and have basically the same characters. Also, both movies mostly have the same plot. The Family Stone was released in December of 2005 and Because I Said So was released in February of 2007. Both movies are about families.


The plot in The Family Stone “is set during Christmas time in a town called Thayer Connecticut.” Dermot Mulroney (Everett) brings home his girlfriend, Meredith, (Sarah Jessica Parker) to meet his family. The family doesn’t like Meredith at all. Meredith is uptight and annoying to the family members. The rest of the characters are: “Amy is Everett sister; Thad, a brother, who is deaf and gay and has an African American Partner; Ben another brother, who is an pothead from Berkeley; Susannah is the eldest sister that is pregnant and has an daughter.” One of the daughters attacks Meredith and she decides to stay at the inn for a couple of days. Later on, the father insists the family to treat her better. Sybil (Diane Keaton) told her son that Meredith was not the one for him. Then Meredith calls her sister, Julie, (Danes) to ask her to come into town for some moral support. Meredith tries to fit in by starting a conversation with Sybil and suddenly what she says the whole family takes it the wrong way and an outrage happens. The middle brother, Ben, took her out to a bar and they had a few drinks. Christmas morning comes around; Sybil (Keaton) reveals her illness to her family that she has (presumably cancer) that will take her life. “Everybody’s personality conflicts come to ahead, and the family begins the process of healing.” “About one year later, in the Stone family Meredith and Ben are a couple; now Julie and Everett are a couple; Thad and Patrick have adopted a baby boy and Susannah had a baby. Amy is with Brad (EMT). Sybil passed away, but they were able to make sure the entire family was happy before she died, and that was her ultimate wish.


The plot in Because I Said So “is set to open at a wedding. The bride, Maggie, (Lauren Graham) her sister, Mae, (Piper Perabo) and mother, Daphne, (Diane Keaton), are trying to set up the youngest sister, Milly (Mandy Moore), up with a bachelor at the reception. As they send her off to introduce herself, Daphne, warned her not to do the “nervous laugh.” “At another wedding, Mae is the bride and Milly stole away into a bedroom with a guy she met at the wedding.” Her sisters are happy for her but she didn’t realize that the man she is with is married. Since then Milly has been unsuccessful in her relationships. Daphne is widowed from an unhappy marriage, spends all her time helping her daughter not end up alone. For example, Daphne placed a personal ad without telling Milly. She then goes to a restaurant to meet guys that respond to the ad. After some of the interviews that didn’t really go well for her, a guitarist from the restaurant band named Johnny sat down and wanted to meet Milly but Daphne doesn’t think he will work out. Another guy named Jason an architect sat down, and Daphne decides he will be perfect for Milly. Jason and Milly meet for the first time and starts dating. But Milly is more relaxed and neutral to Johnny and she continues to go on two dates. One night Milly had two dates with the two guys. The first guy she went out with was Johnny and his father Joe came over with Lionel because he locked himself out of the house. Daphne and Joe instantly bonded together. Later that night Milly goes out with Jason. Johnny saw them together confronted her, and broke it off. Then Milly realized Jason is not the right guy for her. Then Milly goes back to her unhappy life again. Daphne finally sees that Johnny will make Milly happy. Milly tried to talk to Johnny but he wouldn’t talk to her at all. Then Daphne saw Johnny and tells him that his pride is getting in the way. At the end of the movie it closes with another wedding. Johnny and Milly got together. Also, Daphne and Joe are together.


The difference between two of the movies are how one movie starts out in a wedding and the other movie starts during Christmas time. In the Family Stone it was not a good connection with Meredith. The family thinks she is very annoying. In Because I Said So, the sisters get along together very well and try to help their little sister out a lot.


In conclusion, both movies are about two families who care and love each other and want the best for each other. My views are both movies are different from other people. I like both movies.

Please help me. can u guys read this over and see what else i need. it is due monday?
I think the formation of your sentences needs work on as they has fullstops in odd places, for example:





In this essay, I’m going to compare and contrast two movies. They are The Family Stone and Because I Said So. Both of the movies I enjoyed very much because it has my favorite actress in them. Both movies are comedy and have basically the same characters. Also, both movies mostly have the same plot. The Family Stone was released in December of 2005 and Because I Said So was released in February of 2007. Both movies are about families.





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In this essay I am going to compare and contrast two movies these are The Family Stone, which was release in December 2005 and Because I Said So, which was released in February of 2007. I enjoyed both of these movies very much as they are both comedic, contain my favourite actress and have similar plots about families.





I hope this is of help.
Reply:work on the introduction and conclusion. everything else is fine.

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